Breath of Angel
is one of those books which, once I started reading, I simply could not put down. The story pulled me in immediately and kept me riveted to the page to the very end. In fact, when the book ended I was disappointed to find myself sitting on my couch in my own world!
I am a fantasy fan of long standing and I am particular about what books I read in the genre. In Breath of Angel, Karyn Henley has created a believable and exciting world. Her characters are well drawn and their plight is real and compelling. I can’t wait for the next book in the series!
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and the book:
WaterBrook Press (June 21, 2011)
***Special thanks to Lynette Kittle, Senior Publicist, WaterBrook Multnomah, a Division of Random House for sending me a review copy.***
Karyn Henley has written over 100 titles, along with being an accomplished songwriter nominated for a Dove Award. She also received a regional Emmy Award as Music Composer for a television special and lives in Nashville, Tennessee with her husband, a jazz drummer.
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In Breath of Angel (WaterBrook Press, June 21, 2011), award winning author Karyn Henley brings to life the tale of Melaia, a young priestess who witnesses the murder of a stranger in the temple courtyard. A place where age-old legends recited in song suddenly come to life, in this story of two immortal brothers quest for restoration.
With Angels. Shape-shifters. Myths and storiesâ€¦ Melaia finds herself in the middle of a blood feud between two immortal brothers who destroyed the stairway to heaven, stranding angels in the earthly realm.
Young readers are sure to be intrigued and dig deeper into this make-believe story that explores the payment for redemption.
List Price: $9.99
Reading level: Young Adult
Paperback: 272 pages
Publisher: WaterBrook Press (June 21, 2011)
AND NOW…THE FIRST CHAPTER:
The prick of the thorn drew blood, but Melaia smiled. The last ramble rose of the season was well worth a pierced thumb. She carefully drew the blossom from the vine that clung to the side of the temple. As she breathed its rich, sweet scent, she sensed someone watching and looked up, expecting to see one of the novice priestesses. She saw only dry leaves skittering across the flagstones of the walled courtyard, along with a black feather, no doubt from a bird scavenging seeds in the woodpile.
Then a haggard young man stepped through the gate, and Melaia drew back. The chill autumn breeze riffled the edge of his dirt-stained cloak, revealing the corner of a journey pack and the hilt of a dagger. Melaia gave him a tentative nod.
â€œIâ€™ve comeâ€”â€ His voice was dirt dry. He wiped his fist across his mouth.
â€œIâ€™ll fetch water.â€ Melaia tucked the rose into her waist sash and headed for the stone urn by the arched doorway. â€œTravelers are always welcome at our temple. Weâ€™ve pallets if you wish to stay the night.â€ She would have to check with the high priestess, but Hanni rarely turned away weary travelers.
â€œMy thanks,â€ the man croaked.
Melaia flipped back her loose honey brown braid and dipped a pottery cup into the cool water. â€œIâ€™m chantress here, always eager to hear new tales from travelers.â€
The young man looked too weary to tell tales. Or too ill. His dark-ringed eyes darted from one afternoon shadow to another, and he cocked his head as if he heard something beyond the walls.
â€œWeâ€™re healers here as well,â€ she offered.
For a moment his wild eyes focused on her. Then he glanced above her head, and his hand went to his dagger.
But he never drew it.
A hawk, larger than any sheâ€™d ever seen, shot like an arrow past Melaia and sank its talons into the strangerâ€™s chest. The manâ€™s raw screams pierced the air as the hawkâ€™s beak knifed at his throat.
Melaia stood stunned and speechless. But as the hawk flapped its great wings and lifted the man a handbreadth off the flagstones, her senses surged back.
She snatched a branch from the woodpile and swung it at the hawk. The raptor screeched and dropped the stranger. â€œFight!â€ she yelled at him. â€œFight back!â€
But it was the hawk that fought, its wings beating at her stick as its claws snagged the man again. At last Melaia struck a solid blow to the hawkâ€™s head, and it skidded sideways. She chased after it, but the raptor took to the air, quickly rose, and soared away over the domed roof of the temple.
Melaia flung aside the stick and fell to her knees by the bloodied man. Then she covered her mouth and swallowed a bitter taste. â€œMost High, have mercy,â€ she croaked. Seeing wounds so deep and blood flowing freely, she wasnâ€™t surprised that the strangerâ€™s mistlike spirit had emerged from his body.
As a death-prophet, she could see the shadowy echo writhing around his form as he struggled to live.
â€œMellie? Is it safe?â€ Dark-eyed Iona stood in the temple doorway, holding back the other two novices. At fourteen, she was the motherly one, although Melaia was two years older. Curly-haired Peron, still baby plump at six, peered around Iona, clutching her skirts, while twelve-year-old Nuri broke away from them and ran across the yard, her usual dimpled smile gone.
â€œIs he dead?â€ Nuri asked.
â€œNot yet,â€ Melaia told her. â€œTake Peron and fetch a basket of plumwort. And water.â€
Nuri stared at the manâ€™s wounds. â€œWe saw the hawk.â€
â€œGo!â€ said Melaia. â€œI need plumwort to stanch the bleeding.â€
As Nuri dashed away, Melaia wondered why the high priestess hadnâ€™t appeared.
â€œWhereâ€™s Hanni?â€ she called to Iona.
â€œSummoned to a birthing. The weaverâ€™s wife.â€ Iona nervously twisted the end of her black braid.
â€œThen come help me carry the man inside.â€
Melaia hesitated. She was often called to the bedside of the dying to confirm the moment of death, but never had she been required to reach through a spirit to touch someone. Of course, other people did it all the time, she told herself. They just couldnâ€™t see the struggling, mistlike layer. She took a deep breath, grasped the manâ€™s bloodied cloak, and pressed it to the gashes in his chest. His spirit pooled around her wrists, vibrating like a throat quivering with speech.
â€œCan you hear me?â€ Melaia asked, keeping pressure on his wound. The strangerâ€™s spirit thrummed frantically, as if he were trying to say something.
â€œWhereâ€™s the plumwort?â€ Melaia yelled.
Nuri ran across the yard, sloshing a jar of water. Peron trotted behind her with the basket of plumwort. Iona knelt at the manâ€™s feet, her mouth moving silently in prayer.
Melaia reached for the plumwort, but the manâ€™s spirit slid off his body, thinned into a stream, and seeped through a crack in the flagstones. A sudden, grim silence fell over the yard. Melaia shook her head at Nuri and Peron and closed the manâ€™s green-flecked eyes.
Peron stuck out her lower lip. â€œI was too slow.â€
â€œNo, I was.â€ Nuriâ€™s shoulders drooped.
â€œNo oneâ€™s at fault,â€ said Melaia, but she couldnâ€™t help thinking that the man might still be alive if she had only laid into the hawk sooner. â€œLetâ€™s get him inside.â€ She lifted his upper body. For his bulk he was surprisingly light.
Iona lifted his legs. â€œStarved twig-thin,â€ she said. â€œPoor man.â€
They carried the stranger to the sanctuary altar, the bier for those who
could afford no better. Melaia took a deep breath, wishing Hanni were there.
â€œIona, find me a winding-sheet,â€ she said. â€œPeron, go with Nuri. Fetch more
water and scrub the courtyard.â€
â€œBut itâ€™s bloody,â€ said Nuri. Peron wrinkled her nose.
â€œWould you rather clean the manâ€™s body?â€ asked Melaia. Nuri and Peron
scrambled out the door. Iona followed.
Melaia gently eased the manâ€™s cloak from his chest and winced, wondering where Hanni would begin. She exhaled slowly. â€œStart with the easiest,â€ she murmured.
She untangled his pack from one forearm. As she slipped it free, she noticed the end of a small scroll clenched in his fist. â€œFirst the pack,â€ she told herself, glancing around. Her gaze fell on a shelf of incense bowls. She stashed the pack there, then turned back to the altar-bier and froze.
The strangerâ€™s cloak had fallen back and, with it, a long, white, bloodstained wing.
Melaiaâ€™s knees almost buckled. â€œAn angel?â€ she whispered. It couldnâ€™t be. Angels were found only in legends. Chantersâ€™ stories. Bedtime tales.
Ionaâ€™s voice echoed down the corridor. â€œDo we need more water?â€
Melaia jerked the cloak back around the man.
Iona strode in with a bundle of white linen. â€œDo we need more water?â€
â€œWe need Hanni,â€ said Melaia.
â€œYou look as if youâ€™ve seen the manâ€™s ghost.â€ Iona looked around. â€œHas he
â€œJust go get Hanni.â€
Distant drums signaled the closing of Naviaâ€™s city gates and the change of watch on the walls. On the altar-bier in the temple, the winged man lay serene and clean, covered in white linen up to his chin. Melaia didnâ€™t often sit with the dead, but as she lit the oil lamps behind the bier, she decided that tonight she would request a vigil. She hoped the high priestess would join her, for she had a nightâ€™s worth of questions to ask.
But so far, the high priestess hadnâ€™t returned. She had sent Iona back to say
that the birthing was a difficult one and she must stay with it, although she was upset at the news of a death in the side yard. Hanni intended to stop by the overlordâ€™s villa and bring his advisor, Benasin, back to the temple with her.
As Melaia held the flaming twist of rushweed to the last wick, she eyed the three girls munching their supper on a reed mat across the room. With Hanni gone they had asked to stay with Melaia instead of eating in the hearthroom down the hall. She was glad for their company. She felt as shaky as they did, although she hadnâ€™t told them about the strangerâ€™s wings. She wanted Hanniâ€™s opinion first.
Melaia tossed the spent rushweed into the brazier in the center of the room and stirred the coals into flame. For a moment she watched the smoke curl up and drift like a dying spirit out through the roof hole above. Except dying spirits always drifted down, not up.
â€œIâ€™m saving my scraps for the chee-dees,â€ Peron said, scooping her crumbs into a tiny hill.
â€œFetch your crumb jar from the storeroom, then,â€ said Melaia. â€œWhen youâ€™ve finished cleaning up, Iâ€™ll tell a story.â€
Peron stared warily at the dark corridor that lay beyond the bier.
â€œIâ€™ll go with you.â€ Nuri slipped one of the lamps from its niche. With an uneasy smile she guided Peron to the corridor, giving wide berth to the bier.
Iona stoppered the olive oil. â€œPeron is telling tales again. This time itâ€™s about two falcons scaring away her songbird friends.â€
â€œShe must have been inspired by the hawk in the yard today.â€ Melaia stacked the empty wooden bowls and glanced at the stranger who should have eaten a meal with them tonight.
â€œPeron said the falcons were darker than closed eyes,â€ said Iona. â€œI can picture that.â€ Melaia lifted her harp from its peg.
â€œAnd they had people hands.â€ Iona rolled her eyes.
â€œThat I canâ€™t picture,â€ said Melaia. â€œToo ghoulish.â€
Iona laughed. â€œWith such an imagination Peron will surely become a chantress.â€
A shriek came from the corridor. Peron darted into the room, hugging her crumb jar, with Nuri on her heels. Both girls were open-mouthed and wide-eyed.
Behind them limped a sharp-nosed, beardless man wearing a cloak fashioned
completely of feathersâ€”brown, black, and an iridescent blue that glinted in the lamplight. The skin around one of his round gold eyes was blackened, and a scratch jagged across his brow.
Melaia went cold, head to toe. How had the man entered? Had she left the side door unbolted?
Nuri and Peron ran to Iona, and all three huddled by the wall. Melaia stifled her impulse to join them. Hanni had left her in charge, so in charge she would be. She had fought off a murdering hawk. She had prepared a bloody winged man for burial. She would stand up to this intruder.
She strode to the brazier, her hands clammy as she clung to her harp. â€œThis is the temple of the Most High,â€ she said, hoping he wouldnâ€™t hear the quaver in her voice.
â€œSo it is,â€ he hissed, limping to the bier. â€œI believe I noticed that.â€ â€œWhatâ€™s your business here?â€
He raised an eyebrow. â€œSurely youâ€™re not the high priestess.â€
â€œSheâ€™s the chantress,â€ blurted Peron.
â€œAh. Singer of songs, soother of sorrows,â€ he crooned.
â€œIf youâ€™re here for our treasury box, take it and be on your way,â€ said Melaia.
â€œI have unfinished business with the high priestess,â€ he said.
â€œYou can find her at the overlordâ€™s villa,â€ said Melaia.
â€œNo doubt.â€ With a gloved hand he slid back the sheet that covered the corpse. He smiled at the gashes, then studied Melaia. â€œChantress, play your harp for me.â€
Melaia gaped at him. â€œYou have no rightâ€”â€
â€œOr let me play it,â€ he said. â€œThe little girl can bring it. The one who feeds the birds.â€
Peronâ€™s eyes grew round as the supper bowls, and she shrank behind Ionaâ€™s skirts.
Melaia hugged the harp tighter to her chest and glared at the man defiantly, even as she fought back a fear that curdled in the pit of her stomach. How long had this swaggerer been spying on them?
His unblinking gold eyes stared back at her. â€œI do not take disobedience lightly.â€ His voice was ice. â€œSend the girl with the harp or play it yourself.â€
Melaia swallowed dryly. She felt her courage fall as limp as the poor stranger in the yard. Keeping her eyes on the intruder, she sank to a bench by the brazier and positioned the harp in her lap.
â€œLet us hear the tale of the Wisdom Tree,â€ he said. â€œYou know it, donâ€™t you, Chantress?â€
Melaia scowled at him and motioned for the girls to join her. As she fingered
the melody, they silently gathered around, and she breathed easier. Together they were safer, with the brazier as a barrier between them and the bully.
She turned her attention back to the harp, and over the music she spoke the tale.
In a time long ago, there lived a tribal chieftain whose firstborn son was
a wealthy trader, his second-born a lone hunter. Each year at harvest festival, his sons vied to present him with the best gift. The Firstborn always gave perfumes, musicians, slave dancers, the treasures of his trade. The Second-born presented partridges, deerskins, lion-claw necklaces, the spoils of the hunt. But the Second-born thought his gifts paltry compared to those of the Firstborn. So he set out to seek the greatest gift of all.
Far and wide he journeyed, to no avail. At last, weary and discouraged, he lay to rest in the shade of a tree as tall and wide as the tower of a citadel. The Wisdom Tree it was, bearing fruit that granted the eater knowledge and cleverness.
Peron popped her thumb out of her mouth and chanted, â€œWithin this tree stood the stairway to heaven made wholly of light.â€
â€œExactly,â€ said Melaia, glad that for the moment the tale was distracting Peron from the intruder, whose gold eyes held a hungry glitter. Melaia continued:
An angel named Dreia, guardian of the Tree, saw the Second son lying there and asked the cause of his despair. When he told his tale, she pitied him and gave him the juice of one fruit. â€œThis will grant you knowledge and cleverness to find the right gift for your father,â€ she said.
As he sipped the juice, the manâ€™s eyes brightened. â€œI know the perfect gift,â€ he said. â€œA fruit from this Tree.â€
Dreia hadnâ€™t intended to give the man a whole fruit. Its seeds were precious, carried by angels into the heavens to plant wisdom trees in worlds among the stars. Yet the man was handsome, his entreaties eloquent.
At last Dreia said, â€œYou may take one fruit if you vow to bring me the first creature that greets you when you arrive home. This I shall send over the stairway as payment. Moreover, you shall return the three
seeds of this fruit, for they are strictly forbidden to mortals. Should you fail to repay your debt, the Tree itself shall exact payment in breath and blood.â€
The Second-born agreed to the bargain, for the one who always greeted his homecoming was his old hunting dog. Taking his dog and the seeds back to Dreia would be good reason to see the beautiful angel again. So he carried the fruit home.
While he was still afar off, he saw, bounding across the field to greet him, his young niece. â€œUncle!â€ she cried. â€œTerrible news. Your old hunting dog has died.â€
The Second-born fell to his knees and wept, not for his dog, but for his niece, the only daughter of the Firstborn, now to be payment for his debt.
Melaia paused as the intruder slipped off his gloves. His fingernails were long, curved, and sharp. Talons. Her pulse pounded at her throat. His blackened eye, his scratched brow, his feathered cloak, his limp.
She had met him before. As a hawk.
â€œIs there no ending to the tale?â€ He smirked at her recognition of him and stroked the corpse. â€œI favor endings.â€
Melaia felt foggy, as if she were in a dream. She tried to gather her thoughts.
â€œThe Second-born knew only one way to escape his debt,â€ Iona prompted.
â€œYes.â€ Melaia cleared her throat and forced out the words.
The Second-born knew he had to destroy the Wisdom Tree.
Dreia saw an army approaching, the Second son in the lead, betrayal in his heart. She gathered what angels she could. Some plucked the remaining fruit and hastened over the stairway to celestial worlds.
Others stayed behind to defend the Tree. But these were not warring angels. The best they could do was save some of the wood as the Tree fell and was plundered by men who wanted pieces for themselves.
â€œThat was the end of the stairway,â€ Nuri said.
â€œAnd the end of angels in our world,â€ added Iona.
â€œBut the brothers planted the seeds of the Wisdom Tree,â€ offered Peron,
â€œThey did.â€ Melaia set the harp aside. â€œThe brothers learned that cultivating wisdom takes patience.â€
The girls chimed in, â€œWisdom, over time, is earned.â€
The hawkman hissed. â€œA pitiful ending and woefully false.â€ He pointed a taloned finger at Melaia. â€œRemember this, Chantress. The Second-born abducted his niece and headed for Dreia. But fortune was with the Firstborn, for
I discovered the treachery in time to rescue my daughter. To ensure that the Tree never collected on the debt, I destroyed it. My daughter and I ate the seeds, round and shiny, red as blood. We became immortal!â€
â€œYouâ€™re trying to haunt us with our own tale.â€ Melaia took up a poker and stabbed the coals in the brazier, determined not to show her fear. â€œThere were three seeds.â€
â€œSo there were,â€ said the hawkman. â€œThe third I crammed down my brotherâ€™s throat. Now he owes his debt for all eternity. And it is my pleasure to make sure he never repays.â€ He grinned at the dead man. â€œSon of Dreia, this night you are destroyed.â€
He snatched up the corpse, and its wings unfolded. The girls shrieked and ran to Melaia.
The hawkman dropped the body back to the bier as if it had burned him.
Then he cursed and shoved it to the floor. He scanned the room. â€œThe man
had a pack. Where is it?â€
â€œMaybe he lost it in the side yard.â€ Melaia felt her face grow warm at the half lie.
But the man didnâ€™t press his search. Instead, he stiffened and stared at the front door, his head cocked, listening. Melaia heard only wind, but the hawkman slowly retreated, tense as a cat backing away from danger. He glanced from the door to the window to the roof hole, where smoke drifted into the night. Then he hurtled toward the brazier, and his body contorted.
All of Melaiaâ€™s instincts screamed at her to run, but she stayed her feet, clenched her jaw, and gripped the poker with both hands. As the hawk leaped into the flames, she swung with all her might.
She struck only air as he rose in the smoke and vanished.