I can tell by some of the comments on the last three posts that I’ve spread the story too thin, put in too many twists, and lost some of you, so here is a quick, simple synopsis of Copper’s story to date:
Daze of Wine & Murder
Chianti Sangiovese is about to preside over her first Bacchanal Festival.Â She is a novice bacchante who just finished her formal training as a priestess — training she underwent only to please her long time lover, Stephen.Â However, while Chianti was away at training, Stephen met and married another woman.
Chianti, enraged, plans to murder Stephen at the Bacchanal Festival. Instead, Stephen drugs and poisons Chianti, who, just before passing out, recognizes Stephen’s new wife as the woman who sold her the poison she’d planned to use on Stephen.
As the sun rises, police Detective Vincent Copper assesses the murder scene where apparently everyone who attended the party has died from some kind of poisoning except Janice Wheeler, aka Chianti Sangiovese.Â Two previous Bacchanal Festivals had ended with all attendees dead — 162 people in all — and Copper dreams about each of them every time he sleeps.Â Janice Wheeler is the only living witness to the last minutes of the Bacchanal.Â She is rushed to the hospital ICU and put under guard — though Copper has not yet decided if she is a victim or a suspect.Â Copper also has a hunch that there may have been more than one set of criminals and one crime perpetrated that night.
Copper checks in with his police chief and then goes to the hospital to make certain Janice Wheeler arrived safely and is under guard.Â He encounters the ICU Charge Nurse, Melinda Spanner, who challenges his right to make command decisions in her ICU.
Copper went from ICU to the forensics lab, where he learned that Janice had been sedated and then poisoned, and remained alive only because the two chemical agents counteracted each other.Â Copper also learned that at the first two Bacchanals, there were 18 identical bottles of poisoned wine, and the poison in every bottle was the same.Â However, at the third Bacchanal, the one they were hoping Janice Wheeler aka Chianti Sangiovese could shed some light on, there were three different types of poison in three different types of wine.Â This made Copper even more suspicious and he began to wonder if he was dealing with the original murderer and a copy cat murderer — and he suspects Janice is the copy cat.
Copper also learned that an unidentified set of fingerprints — probably male — were found on the Bacchanal Priestess’ goblet, and a bottle of Vidussi Schioppettino 2004 wine.Â Both the wine in the goblet and the wine in the bottle contained traces of Prozac, which was one of the drugs Janice Wheeler overdosed on.Â Martin Creedence, the lead CSI assigned to the case, tells Copper he believes there were two Bacchante Priestesses at the festival, and that one of them left alive.Â Credence believes this because Janice Wheeler did not drink the ceremonial wine laced with Xanax, but all the other revelers had — therefore someone else had to have blessed the wine and lead the ceremony, but not one of dead bore the distinct tattoo of a Bacchanal Priestess.
In the forensics lab Marty notices Copper’s nervousness and asks him why he’s a murder detective if corpses bother him.Â Copper confesses that he has nightmares about the victims of his unsolved cases. Finally, as he’s leaving forensics and feeling grateful that the press hasn’t gotten wind of the murders yet, Officer Marsh catches up to him to report that the Chief of Police and several uniformed officers are at the hospital directing crowd control, and the local newspaper is proclaiming the mass murders far and wide under the headline, Sublunary Killer Strikes Again.
Copper sleeps and dreams of the murder victims.Â They accuse him of not working to avenge their murders.
No drunken revelers were actually killed in the writing of this story
(though a few readers may have perished from boredom.)
17 thoughts on “Synopsis”
I think the perished reader syndrome comes from writing “other things” rather than about our lives. I always have mOre readers / comments on the days I write about what’s going on in MY life rather than writing a poem or a wordzzle or any such fantasy anything… I dunno. BUT … a really good dig in deep chapter of Copper WOULD be nice — but Quilly? How do find TIME? This is why it takes good books such a long time to get written — even by PROFESSIONAL writers!
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Melli — maybe. My stats dropped 100%. I think the weather may have something to do with it, too!
I glad you you did a synopsis. My memory is not very good. I have to reread my own story before I write a chapter.
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Betty, I keep the story on a link up above, but rereading the entire thing from week to week would get to be a drag! Even my synopsis was pretty long!
Well I came in at the end of this and it seems very complicated, but clear as mud. I want to know now if she is the killer or a copy cat killer and why this poor man is having these nightmare!
You do know me btw. I am just different today. Go to a private blog and you will find me. 🙂
Oh and come to MY blog here as well of course!
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Thumbelina — of course I know you! Welcome back into the light! 😉
This story will continue on Thursdays. Come and visit!
Boring-Never! Who ever would dare say such a thing about one of your stories can be sent to me where I will show them the true meaning of boring.
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LOL! You are much too busy and loud to ever be boring. I am enjoying your Anduvian tale.
Wow, to dream of over 160 dead people. He must have a really busy dreamscape and wake up exhausted.
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Yes. He doesn’t care for it much.
Last night in my dream I rode a non-motorized scooter 35 miles. Except for a few downhill bits when I coasted, I think I might have been better off to just walk!
well, i didn’t have any problems following the story but a synopsis now and again can do no harm 🙂
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I’m glad you were tracking. A few others thought there had been four sets of murders and a couple of people didn’t know Chiante and Janice were the same person.
Thanks for the synopsis. I like you have a page dedicated to an ongoing story so I just figure people would go there. But this is helpful.
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Thom — I believe there are a few people who feel re-reading is too much work, and after a couple of more installments they may well be correct!
That was interestimng. But then I read the originals.
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Dr. John — everything isn’t always about you! Others were forgetting or getting confused..
I did not perish, and I read every word. I did drink some wine though, and suddenly I’m feeling… aaaack!!
Sweet dreams, Copper. Solve this case, and you’ll sleep like a baby!
Happy Weekend, Quilly!!
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