Poems From My Students

Girls

preppy, smart

caring, sharing, shopping

beautiful, long-haired, sporting, fast

daring, rapping, rocking

messy, hairy

boys

 

–RL

 

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Summer

hot, sunny

watering, swimming, fishing

warm, nice, cold, rainy

snowing, icing, blowing

white, cloudy

winter

 

–LM

 

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Nice

graceful, quiet

pleasing, loving caring,

pleasant, thoughtful, evil, crazy

hating, annoying, irritating

improper, wicked

bad

 

–KV

 

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Sweet

good, lucious,

engaging, pleasing, satidfying

pleasant, pure, sharp, tart

twisting, watering, puckering

bitter, irritable

sour

 

–OA

 

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7 thoughts on “Poems From My Students

  1. wow…love the first one becuase of its cheekiness…and the other ones, so swiftly and smoothly move into their opposite! very impressive indeed!

  2. Polona, noe bad for 11 year olds, huh?

    Minka — the first is my fav, too. I still have about 250 more to plow through, but out of the 1st 100, these were the best.

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