No Safe Haven
The plane dropped like a 3,000-pound stone. The story starts there and then the tension ratchets up. This is a buckle-your-seat-belt-and-hold-on-to-your-head kind of read.Â Every page needed to be turned, every word needed to be read — immediately!
Jenna and Andie survive the plane crash but they are stranded in the frozen Alaskan wilderness with the man who wrestled the plane away from their pilot. Should they trust him, or are they his next victims?Â He helped them survive the crash, but why is he forcing them to climb up the mountain and away from help?Â He claims they are being hunted but he won’t say why.Â Jenna is injured and Andie suffers from a rare genetic disorder requiring her to take special care inÂ regulating her body temperature.Â They need to climb down the mountain, not up.
No Safe Haven is extremely well-written and held my attention from beginning to end, but the book isn’t long enough.Â The pace of the story literally pulls the reader through from beginning to end, and the last page comes way too soon.Â The story is tied up too quickly and neatly at the end.Â I think it would have been better served with a prologue.Â The main characters needed a little more time to come to terms with several life altering discoveries before they made even more life altering decisions.Â I can’t be too explicit here or I will spoil the story and, even though I think it ended a bit too abruptly, I am perfectly comfortable declaring this a book worth reading.
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and the book:
B&H Books (March 15, 2011)
***Special thanks to Julie Gwinn, Trade Book Marketing, B&H Publishing Group for sending me a review copy.***
Kimberley Woodhouse is a wife, mother, writer, and musician approaching life with a positive outlook despite difficult circumstances. Her previous book, Welcome Home: Our Familyâ€™s Journey to Extreme Joy, chronicles her daughterâ€™s extremely rare health issues and how the Woodhouses received an amazing gift through the ABC television program Extreme Makeover: Home Edition.
Kim and her husband have two children and live in Colorado.
Kayla Woodhouse is a teenage author whose life-altering medical condition (a nerve disorder that prevents the body from regulating its temperature or sensing pain) has not stopped her love for swimming. She is home schooled and has an adventure blog called Dragon Claws, Dog Paws, Swimming Laws.
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A young widow and her physically challenged daughter survive a plane crash in the Alaskan mountains but must puzzle together how it relates to the recent death of their husband and father.
List Price: $14.99
Paperback: 352 pages
Publisher: B&H Books (March 15, 2011)
AND NOW…THE FIRST CHAPTER:
The plane dropped like a 3000 pound stone.
Jenna Tikaani-Gray braced herself with one hand, and held a warm, foam cup away from her body with the other as they jostled along. These pockets of air were turning the flight into a wild ride at the fair. Good thing she loved those rides almost as much as she loved flying, because they were dropping again. Down, then up, then down again, until the sky turned to silk and the plane sailed along.
At least the turbulence hadnâ€™t spilled the coffee.
After a long, slow sip, Jenna released a sigh as their small de Havilland DHC-2 Beaver, left the bowl of Anchorage, Alaska, and lifted into the clear blue sky above. The mountains around Anchorage always produced a bumpy ride, but sheâ€™d managed to pass coffee to Hank and their other passenger without mishap.
Only one more leg of the journey and theyâ€™d be home.
A beautiful hand reached across the seat, welcoming her embrace, and she smiled at her twelve-year-old daughter, Andrea. Such a sweet kid. Jenna had definitely been blessed from above with her only child. Andrea had been through such trial and heartache, yet faced the world smiling.
Jenna squeezed her daughterâ€™s hand as the radio buzzed and crackled.
â€œJuliet Kilo 3-2-6 Novemberâ€–Departure Control came through the channel loud and clear.–â€œIâ€™m getting no mode C on your transponder. Squawk 2-3-7-5 i-dent.â€
Hank, the pilot, replied, â€œRoger. Juliet Kilo 3-2-6 November i-dentâ€¦â€
â€œNegative radar contact. Maintain VFR. Do you have another transponder?â€
â€œRoger. Iâ€™ll switch to backup.â€
Jenna leaned over the side of her seat watching Hank flip the switch from transponder A to B. She waited for word from Departure Control.
â€œStill negative radar contact. Can you maintain VFR?â€
â€œRoger that, Control. No problem.â€
That was strange. How could both transponders be malfunctioning? She furrowed her brow. When they returned to North Pole, sheâ€™d have to get it checked out. Good thing Hank was an experienced pilot. Since Marcâ€™s death, Jenna had hired him to pilot their plane, and knew he could handle whatever might happen.
Andie pulled on her arm, bringing Jennaâ€™s attention from the cockpit back to her daughter.
â€œWhat does VFR mean?â€ Andieâ€™s fascination was clear on her face.
Jenna felt the tension ease from her own features as she leaned close to Andie, a little thrill rippling through her body. How she loved talking about flying. â€œVisual Flight Rules. Hank filed an IFR flight planâ€”Instrument Flight Rulesâ€”but the transponders must be malfunctioning, so the tower is instructing him to fly VFR, meaning visually. If we didnâ€™t have a clear day, that would make flying VFR trickier, sometimes impossible.â€
â€œIs it safe to fly VFR?â€
Andie must have noted her reaction earlier. Jenna had never been good at hiding things from her inquisitive child.
Jenna noticed the other passenger glance back at them from his seat next to the pilot, and she held back a frown. The rough flight could explain the manâ€™s lack of a smile, but what caused the fierce look he shot them? Jenna cocked her head, questioning the man with her silent stare. A poke from Andie brought her back to the question.
â€œYes, sweetie. Itâ€™s perfectly safe.â€
â€œJust checkinâ€™.â€ Andie giggled, squeezed Jennaâ€™s hand, and turned to look out the tiny window next to her seat.
The man watched Jenna as she faced forward once again. Something in his intense gaze pulled at her, but she couldnâ€™t discern what. Sheâ€™d been so excited about going home that she hadnâ€™t paid attention when they were introduced. His first name was . . . Cole? Ugh. Good job remembering the details, Jenna. Marc had taught her better than that.
Well, whether she could remember his name or not, something about this guy bothered her. She just couldnâ€™t put her finger on what.
Forcing herself to break the connection, she slid her chin left and tried to focus on the scenery beneath them. Greens and blues melded with the white of melting snow. This was her favorite part of flying. Watching the beauty of Godâ€™s handiwork skim below her.
The two men up front spoke in hushed tones, bringing her attention back to their puzzling guest. Hank approached her before the flight asking if they could take another passenger, and she didnâ€™t mind since the added income would be to her benefit. But who was this guy? And why, if he were just another tourist, was he so serious?
Closing her eyes, Jenna attempted to dispel her concerns. Think about the amazing news from Andieâ€™s neurosurgeon instead. The results were far beyond her expectations, and for the first time in many years Jenna allowed herself to dream big for her precious child. So much tragedy and hurt could now be replaced with hope. The future was brighter than ever.
Instinctively, she reached for the dog tags around her neck. If only Marc couldâ€™ve been there. Heâ€™d been distraught when, as a toddler, their daughter was first diagnosed. But the additional diagnosis two years ago just about broke the man. Heâ€™d never quite recovered, and his demeanor had forever changed. The once crazy adventurerâ€”a man full of life and laughterâ€”closed himself behind a stone wall of protection.
Sheâ€™d fought long and hard to penetrate his defenses, but taking care of Andie had become their focus, taken all their energy. When their daughter went in for brain surgery a year ago, the walls between them finally fell as they cried and held one another in the surgical waiting room. But Jenna never had the chance to discover what drove her husband to such emotional extremes. The accident happened before Andie was released from the hospital.
Opening her eyes, she blinked back the tears threatening to spill down her cheeks. Stop it! This is no time for tears. Itâ€™s a happy day.
They would move on from here.
She turned to gaze out the window. How long had she been lost in her memories? And, for that matterâ€¦where were they? Leaning closer to the glass, she searched for familiar landmarks. The scenery wasnâ€™t right.
Before she could open her mouth to speak to Hank, brisk movement in the cockpit drew her attention to the two men up front. Seeing a tangle of arms shoved her heart into her throat.
Hank was fighting the passenger!
The man grabbed Hankâ€™s arm andâ€”a gun! Hank had a gun!
Before Jenna could move, Hank jerked his arm free, took aim, and shot the radio. Glancing at Andie, she ripped open her seatbelt. Her daughterâ€™s eyes widened and her mouth hung open as Jenna yanked the belt off her and shoved her over the seat toward the rear of the plane. She climbed after her frightened child, signaling her to crouch in the floor. As Jenna hunched over her sweet daughter, she hugged her tight, whispering calming words in an attempt to shield her from the horror of the scene unfolding in front of them.
The plane plunged and veered to the west.
Heart thundering, Jenna monitored the scuffle through a crack between the seats and prayed for wisdom and safety. What was happening? And why? Arms wrestled and tangledâ€”the passenger pushed upward, almost hovering over the pilot. What if he killed Hank?
As the plane teetered and shuddered, Jenna felt the panic rise in her throat. Surely God wasnâ€™t going to let Andie die, not after all sheâ€™d survived already.
The man rammed a fist into the pilotâ€™s face. Though Hank tried to fight back, he soon crumpled under the intense blows. Hank wore an evil smirk as he croaked out the awful words: â€œYouâ€™llâ€¦never makeâ€¦itâ€¦aliveâ€¦â€
The same fear that stole her breath rushed into the passengerâ€™s face. What did Hank mean? Was it a threat to the passenger? Or to them all?
Determination stretched taut over the manâ€™s rugged features as he threw Hank to the floor behind him, and climbed into the pilotâ€™s seat. â€œTie his hands!â€ He tossed a small cord to Jenna.
He fought to level off the plane, then glanced back in her direction. His breaths were ragged and his eyes bore a glassy sheen. He looked differentâ€¦ unfocused. Dare she depend on him? After Hankâ€™s words, Jenna wasnâ€™t sure about anything. It was all happening too fast.
Grabbing Andie, she hauled herself back over the seat and fumbled with the cording. It was a good thing Hank was unconscious, as her knots needed work. She darted a glance toward the cockpit, and decided to strap Hank back in. Their landing could be really rough if this guy didnâ€™t know what he was doing, and she wanted their former pilot to be in decent condition to go to jail.
â€œLeave him!â€ Even though his upper lip was sweaty and he looked slightly green, his glare could burn a hole through steel. â€œYou two buckle up!â€ He turned back to the controls.
Jenna bowed her head in prayer.
â€œThis may be bumpy, I donâ€™t knowâ€¦what they did toâ€¦your planeâ€¦â€ The manâ€™s words grew more and more slurred. â€œIâ€™m not feelingâ€¦soâ€¦ hhhooâ€¦â€
In a matter of seconds, he slid down his seat and slumped over the yoke, arms limp at his sides.
Time stood still. She could hear her lungs taking in air, watched Andieâ€™s eyes widen in fear, felt the plane dive forward, but Jenna couldnâ€™t move. God, Help me! Spare my daughter, please Lord!
Andie screamed. â€œMom!â€
In a split-second, Jennaâ€™s survival instinct kicked in. Bolting up, she grabbed Andie. â€œItâ€™s going to be okay, baby.â€ She slid a hand down Andieâ€™s cheek. â€œI need you to help me move this guy, and then I want you to grab Hankâ€™s headset and buckle up in the co-pilotâ€™s seat. Can you do that?â€
Without waiting for an answer, she squeezed Andieâ€™s shoulder and climbed over seats into the cockpit. Adrenaline pumped pure strength through Jennaâ€™s veins as she moved the bulk of the man who had tried to save them.
Or kill them.
She shook her head and shoved his solid, muscled frame over the seat. Jenna motioned for Andie to help strap him into another seat. Hank was sprawled, with his legs at an odd angle, but she had bigger concerns at the moment. Like landing the plane.
Andie grabbed Hankâ€™s headset, dashed back to the front, and climbed into the seat next to her.
Jenna took a deep breath and turned to the controls as Andie buckled in. She looked through the windshield–and gasped.
Denaliâ€”â€œthe high oneâ€â€”the tallest mountain in North America, loomed before her. They shouldnâ€™t be anywhere near the Alaska Range, and yet here they wereâ€”flying straight into the South Face.
â€œYour seatbelt, Mom!â€
Jennaâ€™s hands gripped the yoke tighter. No time for a seatbelt. She needed control of this plane.
â€œItâ€™s okay, honey. Calm down.â€
â€œBut, Momâ€¦â€ Andie gripped the headset. â€œCan you save us?â€
Two weeks of flight ground school and one lesson didnâ€™t quite give Jenna the know-how she needed to get out of this alive. â€œIâ€™m gonna try, Sweetie.â€ Oh, God! Show me what to do!
Pulling up on the yoke, she tried to level out the small aircraft. â€œHoney, I need you to set those four dials on the radio controls to 1-2-1-5. Thatâ€™s the emergency frequency. 1-2-1-5. Okay?â€
Andie nodded and didnâ€™t hesitate to obey. The kid had been through brain surgery and a lifetime dealing with a rare physical condition. Her hands shook as she sucked in a deep breath and started turning the knobs. â€œOkay, Mom.â€ Nervous blue eyes met hers as she handed over the headset. â€œItâ€™s set.â€
Slamming the headset onto her head, Jenna winced. Careful. Breathe. Andieâ€™s relying on you. â€œMayday! Mayday! Juliet Kilo 3-2-6 November needs emergency assistance. We have no pilot aboard capable of flying this plane. Mayday! Mayday!â€
Crackling, hissing, static, and then silence.
â€œMayday, mayday! Juliet Kilo 3-2-6 November requesting emergency assistance!â€
Andieâ€™s sweet voice filled the cabin as reality set in. â€œMom, the radioâ€™s dead. Hank shot it. Why would he do that, Mom?â€ Tears quietly streamed down her daughterâ€™s face.
â€œBaby, I donâ€™t know, but I have to try to land this plane. Put your head between your knees right now and cover your head with your arms.â€
Her brave little trooper obeyed, and Jenna prayed for guidance. Taking a firm grip on the yoke, she tried to turn the plane. The rudder barely responded. Something was wrong with the ailerons. What had she forgotten?
Okay, Jenna, think. Cut your descent. Flaps down. What else can I do? Oh, God, help me remember! Help me think. There was no avoiding it: they were going to crash. She needed to strap herself in. Fumbling with one hand made it all the more difficult. â€œAndie, help me with the buckle.â€
She had to steer away from Denali. Sultana stood to her left, towering in all her glory. If she could just get close to Kahiltna glacier, she might be able to land there. But they were too high on the mountain. Sheâ€™d have to find a different place and soon. With all her might, she worked the yoke to turn west, but the mountain face rushed toward her at a terrifying pace.
Not much time left.
Lifting the nose up, she prayed for the snow to be deep enough to cushion their landing. It was all she could do. The plane barely responded to her attempts to turn it, and they raced toward the steep mountain side.
With one last cry for help, Jenna lurched as the plane dove toward the side of the mountain. Letting go of the yoke, she flung her arms over her daughterâ€™s body inhaling Andieâ€™s sweet scent: Citrus shampoo and a sweetness all her daughter. But she couldnâ€™t tear her eyes away from the scene.
Metal crunched. Glass shattered and peppered her arms. The plane creaked and groaned as they impacted Sultanaâ€™s unyielding side. The sound of screaming metal surrounded them, and Jenna knew. The mountain had ripped the wings from the fuselage. Her breaths seemed hours apart as the plane pummeled the snow-packed earth underneath them.
Another desperate prayer formed in her mindâ€”only to be blotted out when everything went from the brilliant white of the snow to deep black.
Air crossed my face like someone breathing beside me. Then something rustled next to my hand.
Wind. I feel wind. My thoughts began to clear. Why would I feel the wind inside an airplane? Memories flooded my head and chills raced up my spine. Something wasnâ€™t right. I tried to shake off the foreboding, but the slight movement sent piercing pain screaming through my head.
Ow! Okay, thatâ€™s weird. I wasnâ€™t used to feeling pain.
I placed a hand on my head and put slight pressure to it. Slowly, I opened my eyes.
Oh! Bright light. Wiggling within the tight confines of my seatbelt, I just about conked my head on some sort of thingy hanging in the air above me. Everything was a blur and I felt like I was spinning. Why am I spinning? The sun shone bright, and I rubbed my eyes. The spinning stopped.
The seat belt straps were cutting off the circulation on my shoulders and squeezing the living daylights out of my stomach. I fumbled with the straps and wrestled with the buckles. Finally, I managed to unlatch themâ€”and fell, landing on my shoulder.
I was on the ceiling of the plane. Hanging . . . upside down? No wonder my head hurt. I was just glad I didnâ€™t land on it.
I rubbed the sides of my head to try and clear my fuzzy mind, then climbed on my hands and knees through a hole that at one time must have been the windshield. Moving only made my dizziness worse.
â€œOuchy!â€ My head started to hurt. Really hurt. What was the weird, zinging pain? Waitâ€¦pain? Fear swirled through me like a hurricane. The last time I felt pain, they told me I needed brain surgery. Tears slid down my icy cheeks before I could stop them. Lord, please no! No. No. Not again, God I canâ€™t handle this, itâ€™s too much.
Panic bubbled up inside of me. Stumbling, forcing one foot in front of the other, I kept going. I wiped away the tiny droplets feeling grit and dirt covering my face. I looked down at my upturned palms. They were covered in dirtâ€”
Lots of blood.
Oh, great. Spots danced in front of my eyes as the dizziness overwhelmed me.
And then there was nothing.
The stinging on the back of my head made my eyes pop open. The sky loomed above me, and if I hadnâ€™t known better I would have said it looked threatening. How long was I out? The pain was still there, but at least my brain wasnâ€™t so fuzzy.
Ok, Andrea, do something. Those words seemed to help me push myself to a sitting position. I took deep breaths to calm the shaking that had taken over my body. One more breath, then I reached my left hand back under my long black hair to touch the scar on the back of my neck to see if it was intact. The familiar bumpy groove greeted my fingers. I pulled my hand back with a sigh, but avoided looking at it. I didnâ€™t feel the stickiness of bloodâ€¦well, not on that hand. That must mean no blood or wounds were on my scar. But my sticky right hand haunted me, as if something fierce–like a giant, abominable snowman–lay on top of the blood, waiting to gobble me up.
The fainting happens every time. I hate blood!
Ok, Andie, just donâ€™t think about it.
My surroundings came into focus. Snow, more snow, boulders, glass, the airplaneâ€¦ Uh-oh. The airplane. Hadnâ€™t I been in the airplane? Or had I dreamed that? I glanced aroundâ€”then wished I hadnâ€™t.
Some sort of big, metal part was smashed against a rock face and the tail-rudder-thingamabob had completely fallen off and lay on the other side of the crash. There was no sign of the wings and the windshield was shattered in a million pieces that lay sparkling on the snow as they reflected the sunâ€™s light. And lying in the middle of it all . . .
I ran over to her. She was under one of the wings. Well, partly under one of the wings, covered in blood. Lots of blood. All over her legs. Her jacket was torn and had blood on it too.
â€œMom! You have to wake up, Mom!â€ I shook her shoulder in an attempt to wake her. It didnâ€™t work.
The bloodâ€¦ I pulled in air, then looked away before I threw up, and almost passed out again. Thatâ€™s when I saw the man who fought Hank.
Again, I jerked away, my stomach churning. Too much. Too much fear. Too much loneliness. Too much blood. I couldnâ€™t do it. Walking away, I trudged through the snow, and satâ€”well more accurately, fellâ€”on the ground. Tears spilled down my now soggy face, quickly turning to ice and sparkling on the snow as a scratchy voice inside my head said the most awful truth.
Theyâ€™re dead. Youâ€™re all alone.
Of course, a 3,000 pound stone drops like a 2 ounce one. Just sayin’.
At 350, it’s too short? It must be quite a read! I’ll check it out. Thanks, Quilly!
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