I am a writer.Â I love words.Â Words are my friend.
In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God.
Words are not little Kaylee’s friends.Â The words she knows are ugly, hateful destructive things.Â That’s why she has chosen not to speak.Â Â Sierra, on the other hand, uses words as her shield.Â If she throws up enough words she can mask her pain and keep the memories of her daughter’s death at bay.Â Sierra and Kaylee both long for solace and healing, but neither of therm find it until they come together seeking solace from The Word.
Words, a Novel, by Ginny L. Yttrup is a story of healing and redemption.Â Â Although dealing with dark and vile subject matter, this story is infused with light and hope.Â Â Â I soaked my shirt sleeve and a dozen or so tissues while reading it, but every tear was healing and uplifting.
Ginny L. Yttrup, herself a victim of abuse, eloquently tells Kaylee’s story in the words she doesn’t use.Â The readers are not dragged through graphic and horrific scenes, yet we understand that they occurred.Â From the first word in this book to the last, I read every one and couldn’t stop, and through them all I was very much aware ofÂ The Word, and the promise of a peace that passes all understanding.Â Â I recommend putting this book on your must read list.Â I am putting it in my permanent collection.
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and the book:
B&H Books (February 1, 2011)
***Special thanks to Julie Gwinn, Trade Book Marketing, B&H Publishing Group for sending me a review copy.***
Ginny L. Yttrup is an accomplished freelance writer, speaker, and life coach who also ministers to women wounded by sexual trauma. Her blogs include Fiction Creator, My Daily Light, and Crossings Life Coaching. She has two grown sons and lives in California. Words is her first novel.
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â€œI collect words. I keep them in a box in my mind. Whenever I wanted, Iâ€™d open the box and pick up the papers, reading and feeling the words all at once. Then I could hide the box. But the words are safer in my mind. There, he canâ€™t take them.â€
Ten-year old Kaylee Wren doesnâ€™t speak. Not since her drug-addled mother walked away, leaving her in a remote cabin nestled in the towering redwoods-in the care of a man who is as dangerous as he is evil. With silence her only refuge, Kaylee collects words she might never speak from the only memento her mother left behind: a dictionary.
Sierra Dawn is thirty-four, an artist, and alone. She has allowed the shame of her past to silence her present hopes and chooses to bury her pain by trying to control her circumstances. But on the twelfth anniversary of her daughterâ€™s death, Sierraâ€™s control begins to crumble as the God of her childhood woos her back to Himself.
Brought together by Divine design, Kaylee and Sierra will discover together the healing mercy of the Wordâ€”Jesus Christ.
List Price: $14.99
Paperback: 352 pages
Publisher: B&H Books (February 1, 2011)
AND NOW…THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS:
â€œIn the beginning was the Word.â€
â€œAll those things for which we have no words are lost. The mindâ€”the cultureâ€”has two little tools, grammar and lexicon: a decorated sand bucket and a matching shovel. With these we bluster about the continents and do all the worldâ€™s work. With these we try to save our very lives.â€
I collect words.
I keep them in a box in my mind. Iâ€™d like to keep them in a real box, something pretty, maybe a shoe box covered with flowered wrapping paper. Iâ€™d write my words on scraps of paper and then put them in the box. Whenever I wanted, Iâ€™d open the box and pick up the papers, reading and feeling the words all at once. Then I could hide the box.
But the words are safer in my mind. There, he canâ€™t take them.
The dictionary is heavy on my lap. Iâ€™m on page 1,908. Iâ€™m reading through the Ss. When I finish the Zs, Iâ€™ll start all over again.
I like that word. It means something extra, something special, something you donâ€™t need. Itâ€™s super. But you donâ€™t need super. You just need good enough.
How does it sound when someone says it?
I didnâ€™t really think about how words sound until I stopped talking. I didnâ€™t mean to stop talking, it just sort of happened.
My mom left.
I got scared.
And the words got stuck.
Now I just read the words and then listen for them on the little radio in the kitchen, the only superfluous thing we have.
As I read, my hair falls across my eyes. I push it out of the way, but it falls back. I push it out of the way again, but this time my fingers catch in a tangle. I work for a minute trying to separate the hairs and smooth them down.
When my mom was here, she combed my hair most mornings. Our hair is the same. â€œStick straight and dark as soot.â€ Thatâ€™s what she used to say.
It hurt when she pulled the comb through my hair. â€œKaylee, stop squirming,â€ sheâ€™d tell me. â€œItâ€™ll pull more if you move.â€
Sometimes Iâ€™d cry when the comb caught in a knot and sheâ€™d get impatient and tell me to stop whining.
Maybe thatâ€™s why she left. Maybe she got tired of my whining.
Thatâ€™s what he says. He tells me she didnâ€™t love me anymoreâ€”that she wanted out. But I donâ€™t believe him. I think something happened to her, an accident or something.
She probably has amnesia. I read that word in the dictionary.
Thatâ€™s when you hit your head so hard on something that you pass out and have to go to the hospital and when you wake up, you donâ€™t remember anything. Not even your name.
Not even that you have a daughter.
I think thatâ€™s what happened to my mom. When she remembers, sheâ€™ll come back and get me.
So I just wait. I wonâ€™t leave. If I leave, she wonâ€™t know where to find me.
And when she comes back, Iâ€™ll be good. I wonâ€™t whine anymore.
I was nine when she left. Now, Iâ€™m ten. Iâ€™ll be eleven the day after Christmas. I always know itâ€™s near my birthday when they start playing all the bell songs on the radio. I like Silver Bells. I like to think about the city sidewalks and all the people dressed in holiday style. But Jingle Bells is my favorite. Dashing through the snow on a one-horse open sleigh sounds fun.
Itâ€™s not near my birthday yet. Itâ€™s still warm outside.
As the sun sets, the cabin gets dark inside, too dark to read. He didnâ€™t pay the electric bill, again. I hope he pays it before Christmas or I wonâ€™t hear the songs on the radio.
Before I put the dictionary away, I turn to the front page and run my fingers across the writing scribbled there. â€œLee and Katherine Wren. Congratulations.
Lee and Katherine are my parents. Were my parents. Are my parents. Iâ€™m not sure.
My mom told me that the dictionary was a gift from her Aunt Adele. Mom thought it was kind of a funny wedding gift, but she liked it and kept it even after Lee left. We used it a lot. Sometimes when Iâ€™d ask her a question about what something was or what something meant, sheâ€™d say, â€œGo get the dictionary Kaylee, weâ€™ll look it up.â€ Then sheâ€™d show me how to find the word, and weâ€™d read the definition. Most of the time sheâ€™d make me sound out the words and read them to her. Only sometimes did she read them to me. But most of the time when I asked her a question, she told me to be quiet. She liked it best when I was quiet.
I miss my mom. But the dictionary makes me feel like part of her is still here. While sheâ€™s gone, the dictionary is mine. I have to take care of it. So just like I always do before I put the book away, I ask a silent favor: Please donâ€™t let him notice it. Please donâ€™t let him take it.
I put the dictionary back under the board that makes up a crooked shelf. The splintered wood pricks the tip of one finger as I lift the board and shove the dictionary under. The shelf is supported on one end by two cinderblocks and by one cinderblock and three books on the other end.
I remember the day she set up the shelf. I followed her out the front door and down the steps, and then watched her kneel in the dirt and pull out three concrete blocks sheâ€™d found under the steps. She dusted dirt and cobwebs from the cracks and then carried each block inside. She stacked two blocks one on top of the other at one end of the room and then spaced the last block at the other end of the room, under the window.
â€œKaylee, hand me a few books from that box. Get big ones.â€
I reached into the box and pulled out the biggest bookâ€”the dictionary. Then I handed her the other two books. She stacked them on top of the block and then laid a board across the books and blocks.
Even at seven, I knew what she was doing. Weâ€™d move in with a boyfriend and Mom would get us â€œsettledâ€ which meant sheâ€™d move in our thingsâ€”our clothes, books, and a few toys for me. Sheâ€™d rearrange the apartment, or houseâ€”or this time, the cabinâ€”and make it â€œhomey.â€
After she made the shelf, she lined up our books. Then she placed a vase of wildflowers weâ€™d collected that morning on the end of the shelf. She stood back and looked at what sheâ€™d done. Her smile told me she liked it.
The cabin was small, but of all the places weâ€™d lived, I could tell this was her favorite. And this boyfriend seemed nice enough at first, so I hoped maybe weâ€™d stay this time.
We did stay. Or at least I stayed. So now Iâ€™m the one arranging the shelf and Iâ€™m careful to put it back just as it was. Our books are gone. In their place I return two beer bottles, one with a sharp edge of broken glass, to their dust-free circles on the shelf. I pick up the long-empty bag of Frito Lay corn chips and, before leaning the bag against the broken bottle, I hold it open close to my face and breathe in. The smell of corn and salt make my stomach growl.
Once Iâ€™m sure everything looks just as it was on the shelf, I crawl to my mattress in the corner of the room and sit, Indian-style, with my back against the wall and watch the shadows. Light shines between the boards across the broken front window; shadows of leaves and branches move across the walls, ceiling, and door. Above my head I hear a rat or squirrel on the roof. Its movement scatters pine needles and somethingâ€”a pinecone, I imagineâ€”rolls from the top of the roof, over my head, and then drops into the bed of fallen needles around the front steps.
This is the longest part of the dayâ€”when itâ€™s too dark to read.
When I readâ€¦
Thatâ€™s how it works.
Once the sun goes down, I donâ€™t leave the cabin. Iâ€™m afraid heâ€™ll come back after work and find me gone. Heâ€™s told me not to leave because heâ€™d find me and Iâ€™d be sorry.
I believe him. believe –verb 1. to take as true, real, etc. 2. to have confidence in a statement or promise of (another person).
My legs go numb under my body and my eyes feel heavy, but I donâ€™t sleep. Sleep isnâ€™t safe. Instead, I close my eyes for just a minute and see flames against the backs of my eyelids. They burn everything my mom and I brought to the cabin.
I remember the hissing and popping as the nighttime drizzle hit the bonfire. And I remember his laughter.
â€œSheâ€™s gone for good, Kaylee. She ainâ€™t comin back.â€ He cackled like an old witch as he threw more gasoline on the flames.
The smoke filled my nose and stung my lungs as I watched Lamby, the stuffed animal Iâ€™d slept with since I was a baby, burn along with most of our clothes and books.
The only exceptions were the three books he hadnâ€™t noticed holding up the shelf. My tears couldnâ€™t put out the fire, and I finally stopped crying. I wiped my nose on my sleeve and stepped away from the blaze. I squared my shoulders and stood as tall as I could. Something changed in me that night. I couldnâ€™t be little anymore. I had to be grown up.
I open my eyes and reach my hand under the corner of the mattress. My fingers dig into the hole in the canvas, feeling for the music box that had been inside Lamby. Iâ€™d found it in the ashes the morning after the fire. I tug it free, then wind the key and hold it up to my ear. As the music plays, I remember the words of the song that Grammy taught me just before she died. Jesus loves me, this I knowâ€¦
The song makes me feel sad.
I donâ€™t think Jesus loves me anymore.
Eventually, I must fall asleep, because I wake up startledâ€”mouth dry, palms damp, and my heart pounding.
I hear the noise that woke me, the crunching of leaves and pine needles. I listen. Are his steps steady, even? No. Two steps. Pause. A dragging sound. Pause. A thud as he stumbles. Pause. Will he get up? Or has he passed out? Please let him be out. A metal taste fills my mouth as I hear him struggle to get back on his feet.
â€œKayâ€”leeee?â€ He slurs. â€œYou up? Lemme in.â€
He bangs his fist on the front door, which hasnâ€™t locked or even shut tight since the night he aimed his .22 at the doorknob and blew it to pieces.
The door gives way under the pressure of his fist. As it swings open, he pounds again but misses and falls into the cabin. He goes straight down and hits the floor, head first. A gurgling sound comes from his throat, and I smell the vomit before I see it pooled around his face.
I hope heâ€™ll drown in it.
But he wonâ€™t die tonight.
Instead, he heaves himself onto his back and reaches for the split on his forehead where, even in the dark, I can see the blood trickling into his left eye. Then his hand slides down past his ear and drops to the floor. At the sound of his snoring, I exhale. I realize Iâ€™ve been holding my breath. Waitingâ€¦waitingâ€¦waiting.
Cocooned in crocheted warmth, I slip my hands from beneath the afghan and reach for my journalâ€”a notebook filled with snippets of feelings and phrases. I jot a line: Like shards of glass slivering my soul. I set pen and journal aside and warm my hands around my ritual mug of Earl Gray, considering the phrase. I like the cadence of the alliteration. I see shining slivers piercing an ambiguous soul. I see a canvas layered in hues of red, russet, and black.
A memory calls my name, but I turn away. There will be time for memories later.
I close my eyes against the flame of color igniting the morning sky and allow my body the luxury of relaxing. I breathe deep intentional breaths, exhaling slowly, allowing mind and body to find a like rhythm. With each breath I let go, one by one, the anxieties of the past week.
Printsâ€”signed and numbered. Five hundred in all.
Contract negotiations with two new galleries. Done.
Showing in Carmel last night. Successful.
Mortgage paid. On time for once.
Van Gogh neutered. What did the vet say? â€œHeâ€™s lost his manhoodâ€”be gentle with him. Heâ€™ll need a few days to recoup.â€ Good grief.
A whimper interrupts my reverie. The afghan unfurls as I get up and pad across the deck back into the bungalow. Van presses his nose through the cross-hatch door of his crateâ€”his woeful expression speaking volumes. I open the cage and the spry mutt I met at the shelter a few days before staggers toward the deck, tail between his legs. I translate his body language as utter humiliation and feel guilty for my responsible choice.
â€œSorry pal, itâ€™s the only way I could spring you from the shelter. They made me do it.â€ His ears perk and then droop. His salt and pepper coat bristles against my hand, while his ears are cashmere soft. He sighs and drifts back to sleep while I wonder at the wisdom of adopting an animal thatâ€™s already getting under my skin. I consider packing him up and taking him back before itâ€™s too late. Instead, I brace myself and concede â€œOkay, Iâ€™ll love youâ€”but just a little.â€ He twitches in response.
The distant throttle of fishing boats leaving the harbor and the bickering of gulls overhead break the morning silence followed by the ringing of the phone. I smile and reach for the phone lying under my journal.
â€œHi, Margaret.â€ No need to answer with a questioning â€œHello?â€ Thereâ€™s only one person I know who dares calling at 7:00 a.m. on a Saturday.
Laughter sings through the phone line. â€œShannon, when are you going to stop calling me Margaret?â€
I dubbed her that after the indomitable Margaret Thatcher, prime minister of her homeland. Her unwavering British accent, even after nearly half a century in the United States, and her strength under pressure inspired the nickname. It fits.
â€œWell, as Iâ€™ve told you, Iâ€™ll stop calling you Margaret when you stop calling me Shannon. Need I remind you that I havenâ€™t been Shannon in over a decade?â€
â€œOh, right. Letâ€™s see, what is your name now? Sahara Dust? Sequoia Dew?â€
I play along. â€œDoes Sierra Dawn ring a bell?â€
â€œRight, Sierra Dawn, beautiful name. But youâ€™ll always be Shannon Diane to me.â€
The smile in her voice chases the shadows from my heart. â€œOkay, Mother. I mean Margaret.â€ I pull my knees to my chest and reach for the afghan as I settle back in the weathered Adirondack for our conversation.
â€œSierra, I didnâ€™t wake you, did I?â€
â€œOf course not. What is it you say, â€˜You can take the girl out of the farm, but you canâ€™t take the farm out of the girl.â€™â€
â€œThatâ€™s my girl. Your daddyâ€™s been out in the fields since 6:00 but he let me sleep. I just got up and thought Iâ€™d share a cup of tea with you.â€
I do a quick pacific/central time conversion and realize with some alarm that itâ€™s 9:00 a.m. in Texas.
â€œYou slept until 9:00? You never sleep that late. Whatâ€™s wrong?â€
â€œNothingâ€™s wrong, darling, Iâ€™m simply getting old. I had to get up three times during the night and by this morning I just wanted to sleep. So I indulged.â€
â€œWell, good for you. Iâ€™m glad you called. You know my favorite Saturday mornings are spent with you and Earl.â€
â€œIâ€™m not drinking Earl.â€
A startling confession. â€œYouâ€™re not? What are you drinking?â€
â€œSierra, Iâ€™m drinking Lemon Zinger!â€ Her declaration is followed by a giggle that sounds anything but old.
I stretch my long legs and cross them at the ankles and lean my head against the back of the chair. I feel as though my mother, with gentle skill, has distracted me while sheâ€™s worked to remove a few of those slivers imbedded in my soul. But unless I stop brushing up against my splintered history, the slivers will returnâ€”or so she tells me.
Just before we hang up, she says, â€œShannonâ€”â€ thereâ€™s such tenderness in her voice that I let the slip passâ€” â€œare you going to the cemetery today?â€
Her question tears open the wound, exposing the underlying infection. I imagine her practicality wonâ€™t allow her to leave the wound festering any longer; instead she lances my heart.
I lean forward. â€œYes, Mother. You know I will.â€ My tone is tight, closed. But I canâ€™t seem to help it.
â€œDarling, itâ€™s time to let goâ€”itâ€™s been twelve years. Itâ€™s time to grasp grace and move on.â€
The fringe of the afghan Iâ€™ve played with as weâ€™ve talked is now twisted tight around my index finger, cutting off the circulation. â€œWhat are you saying? That I should just forgetâ€”just let go and walk awayâ€” never think about it again? You know I canâ€™t do that.â€
â€œNot forget, Sierraâ€” forgive. Itâ€™s time.â€
â€œMother, you know I donâ€™t want to talk about this.â€
â€œYes, I know. But you need to at least think about it. Think about the truth. Ask yourself whatâ€™s true.â€
I sigh at my motherâ€™s oft repeated words and grunt my consent before I hang upâ€” or â€œring offâ€ as she would say.
I left Texas at eighteen and headed to California, sure that was where Iâ€™d â€œfind myself.â€ On the day I left, my daddy stood at the driverâ€™s door of my overstuffed used station wagon gazing at the hundreds of acres of soil heâ€™d readied for planting in the fall and gave me what I think of now as my own â€œGreat Commission.â€ In the vernacular of the Bible Belt, my daddy, a farmer with the soul of a poet, sent me out into the world with a purpose.
â€œHoney, do you know why I farm?â€
At eighteen Iâ€™d never considered the â€œwhyâ€ of what my parents did. â€œNo, Daddy. Why?â€
â€œFarmingâ€™s not something that can be done alone. I till the ground, plant the seeds, and irrigate. But itâ€™s the rising and setting of the sun and the changing of the seasons that cause the grain to grow. Farming is a partnership with the Creator. Each year when I reap the harvest, I marvel at a Creator who allows me the honor of co-creating with him.â€
Heâ€™d stopped staring at the fields and instead looked straight at me. â€œLook for what the Creator wants you to do, Shannon. He wants to share his creativity with you. He wants to partner with you. You find what he wants you to do.â€
With that, he planted a kiss on my forehead and shut the door of my car. With my daddyâ€™s commission tucked in my heart, I left in search of my life. My older brother, Jeff, was already in California completing his final year in the agricultural school at Cal-Poly in San Luis Obispo. Tired of dorm life, Jeff and two friends rented a house in town and told me I could rent a room from them for the year. I was thrilled.
Our neighbors and Mother and Daddyâ€™s friends couldnâ€™t understand why theyâ€™d let me â€œrun offâ€ to California. In their minds, California was a dark place where drugs and sex ruled. But Daddy assured them California was not the Sodom and Gomorrah they imagined. He should know. His roots were in California. He was born and raised there. Jeff and I grew up hearing about the Golden State and were determined weâ€™d see it for ourselves one day. College in California seemed a logical choice to both of us.
As I headed west, I thought of my parents and what Iâ€™d learned from each of them through the years. Daddy taught me to see. Where others in our community saw grain, Daddy saw God. He always encouraged me in his quiet and simple way to look beyond the obvious. â€œLook beyond a personâ€™s actions and see their heart. Look for whatâ€™s causing them to act the way they act, then youâ€™ll understand them better.â€
When I was about twelve, Mother and Daddy took us with them down to Galveston for a week. Daddy was there for an American Farm Bureau meeting. After the meeting, we stayed for a few rare days of vacation. I remember standing on the beach and looking out at the flat sea, Daddy pulled me close and pointed at the surf and asked, â€œWhat do you see?â€
â€œThe ocean?â€ I asked it more than stated.
â€œYes, but thereâ€™s more. Youâ€™re seeing Godâ€™s power.â€
I must have seemed unimpressed because Daddy laughed. â€œItâ€™s there Shan, someday youâ€™ll see it. But, Iâ€™ll admit itâ€™s easier to see it in the crashing surf and jagged cliffs of the California coastline.â€
I didnâ€™t understand what he meant thenâ€”and Iâ€™m still not sure I fully understandâ€”but back then my daddyâ€™s description of the California coastline followed me as I was off to see it for myself.
My mother taught me to look for something else. â€œWhatâ€™s the truth, Shannon?â€ sheâ€™d ask over and over, challenging me to choose what was right. She taught me to analyze a situation and then make a decision that represented the truth foundational to our family.
Most often the truth she spoke of was found in the big family Bible sheâ€™d brought with her from England. Sheâ€™d lay the book out on the kitchen table and open it to the book of John in the New Testament and sheâ€™d read from the King James version: â€œAnd ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free.â€
â€œThereâ€™s freedom in the truth, Shannon. You remember that,â€ sheâ€™d say.
Again, Iâ€™m only now beginning to understand what she meant. But these were the lessons from home that I carried with me to California.
So why hadnâ€™t I applied those lessons? Why I had I wandered so far from my parentsâ€™ truth?
Those are questions Iâ€™d ask myself many times over. Iâ€™d yet to find the answers.